Some say you should
start a poem with a
title
just write the words
at the top of the page
and begin
as if a poem is a
waterfall and the
title is the edge
of the cliff and
the words will spill
over the edge
once they begin
to fall, splashing
onto the page,
but I like the idea
of starting without
a title, wandering
aimlessly across the
page, the words
searching for a path
like a river meandering
through the soft earth
finding its way eventually
to the sea—
which might, in the end,
be the title you were looking
for all along.
14 comments:
This is lovely! Thank you, Bruce!
So glad you enjoyed it, Bobbi. Thanks for stopping by.
Beautiful! I absolutely agree - I prefer to let the poem flow wherever it chooses, as I run along beside it, trying to keep up!
Thanks, Jane, for stopping by and sharing a bit of your process. Glad to hear you like letting the words flow, too.
Loved the surprise of coming upon the title in the middle of the poem. :-)
And I almost never start with the title. That comes later.
The poem has such a beautiful voice: this is what I like & here, I'll show you! I loved reading it!
I like your analogy. My thoughts work that way, too, trickling and splashing.
Thanks, Carmela. I've tried starting out with a title and it's an interesting prompt that works, but most of the time, as you say, the title comes later. Either way, it's always a surprise to see the results.
Linda, I'm so grateful for your sweet response. Thank you! Glad you stopped by for a dip.
Trickling and splashing our way to find the next word and the next. I love that idea. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Brenda, and for stopping by.
Love it! I tend to wander around the page in writing my poetry, but I sometimes I wish the words would spill over the cliff edge.
I wander around the page, too, Kay. (Sometimes it feels like I'm wearing a blindfold!) Good luck finding the edge... that's where the surprise waits for us, I think. Thanks for stopping by.
Sounds like it could have been written by Billy Collins! (total compliment)
Mary Lee, thanks so much for stopping by (and for the sweet comparison and compliment).
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