Sunday, May 17, 2026

Revise, revise, revise


If you want your words

to sing on the page


you need to keep harmonizing, 

keep testing different notes, trying


different combinations of words

arranging and rearranging,


then rearranging again

until the words on the page


find the order they are meant to appear in 

as if the final draft 


is a lock’s combination

that you can only discover


through multiple turnings

as if the words themselves


choose their positions on the page,

as if set there


by some divine hand

some muse with the voice


of an angel 

whose voice 


becomes your voice,

her song, your song.