Sunday, April 07, 2013

One Writer’s Process: Pat McDermott

The Mission Hill section of Boston, where novelist Pat McDermott grew up, was mostly an Irish neighborhood. She lived on the top floor of a three-decker house with her parents, grandparents, and her mother’s two sisters.

I am blessed to have two wonderful aunts who happen to be devotees of Irish history,” says McDermott. “When I was a little girl, they entertained me with all sorts of legends and assured me that we were descended from Irish royalty. (Isn’t everyone who’s Irish?)”

As a child, McDermott loved listening to the tales that her father made up and told her and her siblings at bedtime. “His tales often kept me awake for hours,” she recalls. “They left me so enchanted. I wanted to tell enchanting stories too.”

Now McDermott spins her own tales of enchantment for adults and young adults, setting her Band of Roses trilogy and her Glimmer Books for young adults in her beloved Ireland.

McDermott says she starts a story with research, which gives her plenty of ideas for subplots. “The outline approach helps organize my thoughts,” she says, “but outlines aren't written in stone, and they become quite useless when my characters take over the story.”

McDermott attended a number of writing classes over the years, but she says it wasn’t until her own children were nearly grown before she started putting ideas on paper seriously. When one of her short stories in the 74th Writer's Digest Annual Writing contest received an Honorable Mention for children's fiction, her confidence was given a big boost.

Her stories, which include all sorts of genres--fantasy, action/adventure, sci-fi, and romance—compel her to write every day. Beginning early in the quiet of the morning, she doesn’t have to worry about interruptions, except perhaps when one or two of her cats come into her office in need of a gentle hug.

“I host a writers’ group on Monday evenings, which gives me a deadline to get at least a few pages spruced up,” she says, “and I attend a writing class on Tuesday nights to give some extra polish to those pages.”

McDermott now lives near the New Hampshire seacoast with her husband and three Tonkinese cats. When she isn’t writing novels or dreaming about taking another trip to Ireland, McDermott is usually reading or cooking. Recently, she pulled herself away from her desk to share thoughts on writing with wordswimmer’s readers.

Wordswimmer: If writing is like do you get into the water each day?

McDermott: Depends on what I’m writing and where I am in a story. Most days I tiptoe in, though I make my share of graceful dives. At times, I’m reluctant to even get wet, or I’ll sit and wait for the water to pour over me and let me steep like a tea bag. My latest release, a YA set in Ireland, features a troop of water fairies who live in a palace beneath a lake. For the better part of a year, I swam with them nearly every day, sometimes jumping right in, sometimes wading, always wishing I had their webbed toes and fingers.

Wordswimmer: What keeps you afloat...for short work? For longer work?

McDermott: Different swimming styles do the trick for different types of work. For short work, where the opposite shore is in sight and a good sprint will help me reach it, I might swim like Tarzan, knife lodged between his teeth to save Jane from the crocodile. Most of my works are longer, novels I sometimes feel will sink me for sure before I write “The End.” Yet I glide along, treading water or diving for research as necessary, taking breaks by doing laundry or planning a meal. Cooking is one of my favorite hobbies. I have my own cooking blog and love to explore different ethnic cuisines.

Wordswimmer: How do you keep swimming through dry spells? 

McDermott: I slosh through shallow water, inspect the edge of the lake bed, and poke the rocks to see what they’re hiding. Reading helps refuel my imagination, and so I’ll raid the public library or go to Boston to visit my aunts. They have one of the finest collections of antique Irish books this side of the Atlantic, and they graciously let me borrow whatever I want. I admire poets and enjoy finding unique images in nature poetry. I also belong to a writing group whose weekly deadline compels me to write something, anything, for the next meeting. And I always have writing-related tasks, such as transcribing my research notes or favorite descriptive phrases.

Wordswimmer: What's the hardest part of swimming?

McDermott: Ah yes, a monster does lurk in the lake. The fairies work hard to keep him asleep, but I’ve heard him roar at times. Or perhaps that was me, bristling at another rejection letter, an overwhelming schedule that fails to pay the bills, or a mediocre review whose inaccurate details hint at a careless reader/reviewer. At times, when I want to rest, I’ll stand in a spot where the water looks shallow only to step in a hidden hole and find I’m over my head.

Wordswimmer: How do you overcome obstacles, problems, when swimming alone?

McDermott: Finding a safe place to swim alone is a challenge. I discovered a gem when I visited a writing retreat in a remote area of western Ireland. The host took care of the cooking and shopping and had Quiet Time house rules. Her guests had only to write. Even then, distractions, such as the gorgeous scenery, crept in. Yet I found that the lack of domestic responsibilities and freedom from time constraints fostered good writing sessions. Since popping over to Ireland every time I want to write is hardly practical, I’ve tried to recreate some of the conditions that spoiled me there. Deciding what’s for supper early in the day and having everything on hand helps, as does shutting off e-mail and Internet for Quiet Time. Still, procrastination is my biggest obstacle when swimming alone. I have to remind myself that I’d better get to work and write, because whether I’m in Ireland or at home in New Hampshire, ideal writing conditions simply don’t exist. Fortunately, I cherish solitude, probably because I grew up the oldest of seven kids. I like being alone with my characters and scenes, tweaking them until I’m ready to share them with others. Over time, I’ve built an acceptable writing retreat of my own, one with lots of reference books, including several on writing mechanics and style. Contemplative music not only helps me focus on starting that next chapter, it also makes me forget to worry I’m writing a story no one will read. Chocolate helps too.

Wordswimmer: What's the part of swimming that you love the most?

McDermott: Swimming underwater, hands down. When I coast through that blue-green world, surface distractions don’t exist, and the lack of gravity makes it the next best thing to flying. Whether I drift like plankton or zoom like a torpedo, I treasure the freedom to go wherever I please, plunging into a gem-filled abyss or riding a current to places I’ve never imagined. I can twist and turn and dive without effort to visit a fairy palace, a Japanese temple, or a volcano in ancient Italy. These places have already made their way into my stories. Many more still wait for me to find them, and I will, as long as I can get into the water.

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Pat McDermott said...

Thanks so much for you splash of hospitality today, Bruce. I thoroughly enjoyed this interview!

Suzanne de Montigny said...

Sometimes my word swimming is in very muddy and murky water!

Marie Laval said...

What a fun, original interview, Pat! I love your sense of humour! I am not much of a swimmer, I'd rather float on my back, look up at the sky and dream...

Bruce Black said...

It was wonderful swimming with you, Pat. Thanks so much for diving in!

Suzanne... I find it challenging, too, to swim in muddy and murky water, but often realize that those mud holes and murky lagoons are paths that I must take to reach clear water. And there are even some days when I love playing in mud!

Marie... floating... ahh... sometimes that's the best way to dream and find new stories!

Anonymous said...

Great interview! Good for aspiring writers like myself!!! Thank you!

Now, if only I could think of a good skinny-dipping joke....

Unknown said...

Great interview.

Why do I now wish it was summer and I could jump in my pool?

Pat, your writing is always enchanting.

Unknown said...

Your writing is always so enchanting Pat.

Fun interview.

Why do I feel the sudden urge to jump in my pool? If only it was summer!

gail roughton branan said...

What a great Water Park interview! Though for me it'd be pretty scary since I can't swim, it is VERY apt and truly writing is a lot like swimming, especially the murky waters mixed with just underwater enchanted glides.

Pat McDermott said...

Suzanne, I've learned there are special fins the divers wear to minimize stirring up silt. I wish they'd find something like that for writers!

Marie, the idea of floating, preferably on a shark-proof float, Margarita in hand, appeals to me often. I'd probably fall off, however :-)

Thank you both for stopping by!

Cheryl said...

Ah, procrastination. The old monster on land and in the water!

Nice interview!

Pat McDermott said...

Tammy, summer will be here before you know it, but you can jump in your writing pool now. Though you might want to tread water a little after your wonderful new release. Thank you for the kind words!

Gail, when it comes to writing, you swim with the best of them, and in every layer of water.

Cheryl, I suspect that procrastination is endemic to writers. A monster for sure, though you seem to have it under control.

Anonymous, I'm glad you enjoyed the interview.

Thanks so much for dropping in, everyone!

David Duford said...

Such a great interview, not only filled with clever swimming metaphors, but so revealing about your writing process, Pat. You never cease to amaze and inspire me, my friend!

Now, where are my goggles?

Jennifer (JC Page) said...

The thoughts of summer...swimming...when we are experiencing snow. Love the interview Pat! I too have Irish the history and stories alike.

Thank-you Bruce, don't see too many family clan Black surnames where we live. My Grandmother Freda Black would be thrilled!

Bruce Black said...

You're welcome, Jennifer. Great meeting your grandmother, Freda, through you. (I'm sure my Grandmother Gussie would have been thrilled, as well, to meet you!)

Pat McDermott said...

Dave, I'm so glad you enjoyed the swimming metaphors. We'll thank Bruce for contriving those :-)

Jennifer, speaking from New Hampshire, I do hope the snow will soon be a fond memory - one we can do without until next December.

Thank you both for taking the time to comment today!

Kim Cresswell said...

Dreaming of summer...fantastic interview, Pat! Really enjoyed this one. :)

Pat McDermott said...

Kim, I predict your dream will come true :-) Thanks so much for stopping by!

Dianne said...

Great interview and insights!

Paisley Kirkpatrick said...

Great post, Pat. What a fun concept for sharing your writing habits and techniques.

Pat McDermott said...

Paisley, I agree. A fun concept for sure. Thanks for coming by.

Dianne, thank you too!

Wendy said...

Great interview Bruce and Pat. I love the journalistic approach at the start and the originality of the interview with swimming. Writing really is being in the swim of it...when it it's working right.

You are so lucky to be swimming underwater Pat. I love it there. For me at the moment I'm teetering on the high board, scared I'll do a belly flop and cause myself an injury. Might just tippy toe back down the steps.

Pat McDermott said...

Wendy, you'll be immersed again and riding the currents before you know it. Preparing for the dive is important too! Thank you for stopping by.